yaaayy more raze & gwenn!! I always thought they were such an interesting duo & really wanted to see where their story would go, so I'm so happy to read another story with them!! I love the continuity with the fermented fruit incident, & it made me smile when raze discovered he actually did like the sap ^w^
I'm so so curious what will end up happening with them in the future!! looks like raze still doesn't care much about her, gwenn's (platonic) love for him is so sweet & really concerning at the same time >.< eeeeee!!
I wonder how things would go when he gets the opportunity to use her in a way that's more dangerous for her. would he ever start to actually see her as a real friend & feel bad if she gets injured protecting him from another predator? would he hesitate to betray her, kill & eat her if she ever got sick enough that he could feasibly take her down? & how heartbreaking it would be to read gwenn realizing she was being used all this time, that he only made friends with her for personal gain ;O; (not that you shouldn't write that, it's your characters & story & my opinions shouldn't matter if they disrupt your vision, plus I love sad stories so I wouldn't mind it anyway)
don't answer those questions in a comment I'm just expressing how intriguing these characters of yours are to me!! I hope one day you'll write the climax & conclusion to their story but I really genuinely like these stories of them just being pals too, it's a good & necessary part of the story as whether it ends in a falling out or turning into a genuine friendship or something else I haven't predicted it wouldn't hit as hard without buildup & context!
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yaaayy more raze & gwenn!! I always thought they were such an interesting duo & really wanted to see where their story would go, so I'm so happy to read another story with them!! I love the continuity with the fermented fruit incident, & it made me smile when raze discovered he actually did like the sap ^w^
I'm so so curious what will end up happening with them in the future!! looks like raze still doesn't care much about her, gwenn's (platonic) love for him is so sweet & really concerning at the same time >.< eeeeee!!
I wonder how things would go when he gets the opportunity to use her in a way that's more dangerous for her. would he ever start to actually see her as a real friend & feel bad if she gets injured protecting him from another predator? would he hesitate to betray her, kill & eat her if she ever got sick enough that he could feasibly take her down? & how heartbreaking it would be to read gwenn realizing she was being used all this time, that he only made friends with her for personal gain ;O; (not that you shouldn't write that, it's your characters & story & my opinions shouldn't matter if they disrupt your vision, plus I love sad stories so I wouldn't mind it anyway)
don't answer those questions in a comment I'm just expressing how intriguing these characters of yours are to me!! I hope one day you'll write the climax & conclusion to their story but I really genuinely like these stories of them just being pals too, it's a good & necessary part of the story as whether it ends in a falling out or turning into a genuine friendship or something else I haven't predicted it wouldn't hit as hard without buildup & context!
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